tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post4602888012531758903..comments2024-03-28T03:10:19.013-07:00Comments on Fraggmented: Self-Taught Superheroes, Part FourteenJohn Seaveyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07530526320973807452noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post-86128807152213207892011-10-26T13:01:58.029-07:002011-10-26T13:01:58.029-07:00I really liked this part. The whole villains-are-...I really liked this part. The whole villains-are-real moment was interesting, and not something you usually see pointed out even in stories that try to examine what being a hero would really be like. You also successfully managed the apparently quite difficult feat of avoiding your heroes sounding like idiots when they respond to the villain's plot-reveal, which I wish more professional writers could.<br /><br />And, of course, I can't wait to hear more about the "waiter."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com