tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post8050708975179347655..comments2024-03-28T03:10:19.013-07:00Comments on Fraggmented: A Sentence I Can Never FinishJohn Seaveyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07530526320973807452noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post-59817928704897682102014-06-23T00:32:01.571-07:002014-06-23T00:32:01.571-07:00It could be that the protagonist is a child taking...It could be that the protagonist is a child taking revenge upon a parent-and-child who killed his parents.<br /><br />Or someone so blinded by revenge he wants to kill the two children of the (dead) antagonist who wronged his family.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post-68252035349747098392014-04-16T06:14:35.044-07:002014-04-16T06:14:35.044-07:00The two small ones are for the halves of the the o...The two small ones are for the halves of the the one the protagonist is about to take revenge on.<br /><br />That was my first thought upon reading your line. Some dark corners in my mind that I may want to leave alone.<br /><br />Do you have a second line? Just one more?1LLoydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16963814112725103971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15742539.post-33914586841898663222014-04-12T06:11:40.198-07:002014-04-12T06:11:40.198-07:00It's because your protagonist is two kids who ...It's because your protagonist is two kids who disguise themselves as a grownup by having one sit on the other's shoulders and wearing a long coat.Matthew Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01007497367844755093noreply@blogger.com